Zekkyō tamashī {Finished}

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Name of weapon: Zekkyō tamashī
Image:
Type of weapon: Zanpaktou
Power:
Shikai:
Shikai- "Let your screams be heard, Zekkyō Tamashī"
This released form allows for the use of the blades "Sound Amplifying" abilities. As of now, the only things Michelis can do with the blade's current forms are:
1)Screaming Sound- This technique is the blade's most notable ability. The blade starts to 'vibrate' at a extreme speed, causing a very deafening sound. The most notable comparison to this technique is Crona's weapon in Soul Eater, where the blade literally screamed causing her opponents to become crippled due to the sound.
-Weakness: The range at which the sound is effective is quite small at this state.
--10yrds= Practically helpless
--11-50yrds=Semi-Crippling(Half of what 10yrds would cause)
--51yrds-100yrds= Deafening(Use of sound would be non-excistence)
--101yrds+=Noise is Audible, or non-existent to a point
Cause no physical harm or damage through the ability itself.
Those that are deaf are immune to the assault(though this is rare, its still a thing.)
2)Vibration Wave- This is a physical wave, consisting of a mixture between soul energy and a amplified sound wave. The attack itself is a thin slashing wave of the mixture that is a ranged-based attack that is fired from the blade.
-Weakness: The range of the attack is only 30yrds before it dissipates, only standing 10ft in height. The attack also causes Screaming Sound to stop, allowing for the chance to possible dodge or take less threatening damage. With that said, it requires at least a post of Screaming Sound to be active before using.
Bankai- Yet to be released.

Subject: Re: Zekkyō tamashī {Finished} Tue Nov 04, 2014 5:55 pm

change the 10 yard on for something like partly paralyzingly or simulate to give the chans to avoid attacks if edited than I approve

Posts : 193 Credit : 10000 Join date : 2014-10-19 Age : 29

I think the ability is fine to me. It's distanced based, so ranged-based characters can come off uninjured, especially since they can fire an arrow to the kne-- sword hand and disarm him. Sound can also be reduced/nullified by environment or ear plugs. It possesses a sheer number of weaknesses; it's only true strength lies in close range, so unless Michelis possesses high agility, the ability is pretty ineffective.

Giving the opponent a real fighting chance while in the most threatening zone would be very unfair to Michelis as it would give him no opportunity to fight or counterattack. What would be the point of his Shikai if he doesn't receive a benefit from it? Besides, the opponent already has a fighting chance if they just stay outside that zone, and if they don't take it its their fault.

It doesn't come off as overpowered compared to Kaname Tosen's Suzumushi Shikai, which causes instant incapacitation regardless of range.

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